Moonpaw

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Name - Moonpaw
Clan - River Clan
Position - apprentice
Age - 24 moons
Gender - She-cat
Peltage - Moonpaw is soild black.
Markings- She has white moon shapes on either side of her eyes and a star shape on the top of her head.
Birth defects- She can not use her right rear leg as good as her other legs.

Scars- none
Eye color- Moonpaw has light blue eyes.
Personality - Moonpaw is nice and caring. She takes after her mother, who helped out in the nursery with the kits. She wants to be like her mother since her father died protecting the clan from invaders.

She is very shy because of her limp and many cats make fun of her because of it. What hurts the most is when the other cats say that she needed to be killed when she was born because of her having the limp will make the kits she has weak. She knows that is why she has not become a warrior but her littermates have.
History-
IC - A midnight hued she-cat moved through the brush of the jungle. She knew that she was good as any warrior but she just could not last as long as them in a fight. She waited until she countered the rabbit to move in and kill it with her sharp teeth and claws. She carried it back to camp and to the queens that were nursing. She bowed her head to them as she moved to the elders. She groomed them and fed them part of the rabbit that she had brought into camp.

[Silentheart]

I think this time, I'm going to start asking more of you, Missy. You need more detail- and also, although I see how her markings named her, I really don't see a realistic cat to have perfectly symmetrical shapes on both sides of her face like that. Maybe a tabby's eye-streaks, or a spot or blaze in the place of the "star".

Also, at two years, even if shes not a warrior, she would have a warrior name, even if she doesn't do warrior tasks, she could move into the elders den and have a warrior name, or do minor work, live in the warriors den, but none the less, she needs a warrior name.

[dylan]

Thanks for your nice informative post.